Bake A Cake

So, you know I'm coming,
well, there's no excuse.
Fire up the stove
can't you?

I got no real preference
for sponge or heavy fruit.
Just add that sugar
mommy.

I'll knock hard just twice,
like the postman rang -
see what's laid on the
table.

I read all your letters
and one from a friend.
Who was slicing
your pie?

I'll know when you kiss me
if you baked for me.
When you kiss me
deadly.

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Comments

threeleafshamrock | September 13, 2009 - 18:05

Like the ingredients ;)

tcook | September 15, 2009 - 09:12

I really like this - but I find the one verse just doesn't fit - it's the lines:

pull those skirts down
by law

that just seem to throw the whole thing.

Love the song!

Ewan | September 15, 2009 - 10:10

Yes, you're right. The last three words are really no more than dum-de-dum. I've been thinking about this for the last few days, but I'm afraid there's not much creativity between the ears at the moment.