Closed Shops


from the ABC set

Yourtown in the twilight,
as the high street closes up,
the cold of dusk is coming
and you’re rushing for the bus.

You likely haven’t noticed
-as you place your careful boots-
the crumpled shadow people,
all the hopeless, needy looks.

Hidden in the doorways,
with their blankets and their bags,
the wind flapping the plastic
to irritate their dogs.

If you don’t acknowledge them
they’re really hardly there;
ignore the dirty hand held out
below the glassy stare.

And is it really your fault
they haven’t got a hope?
Probably all addicts
-is that the smell of dope?

If you just look at the pavement
you cannot catch their eye
and they’re comfortably invisible
‘til a Samaritan goes by.

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Comments

Richard L. Prov... | February 8, 2008 - 20:01

Very nice. Lots of imagery. Keep up the good work. RLP

Sooz006 | February 9, 2008 - 14:22

A good old look at society. Nice one.

Dendrite | February 9, 2008 - 20:35

A kind of direct and truly humanitarian piece rarely seen. Word pairs like ‘careful boots’ and ‘shadow people’ say a world of things with great economy. The ending makes a point (only a Samaritan makes them visible) that turns the poem over from mere observation to, I think, put some responsibility on us, the nerve, this isn’t a very postmodern of you, Ewan.