Faint Praise


from the ABC set

'I enjoyed your little stories.' She said.
How can such blunt words cut me so?
With ink in my paper cuts, I'm finger
-tattooed like a scrivener at his desk.

Little?

There was blood in the ink;
the words scarred the paper,
each pen-stroke was torn from my soul:
- thank you, Vincent, for explaining.

Little?

I cried remembering them,
the people we had been.
Each player was drawn from the life -
- thank you, reader, for your sneering.

I enjoyed my 'little' stories, I made
the words as sharp as I knew how.
Her salt in my paper cuts, I'm writing
painfully, a scribbler at his desk.

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Comments

chuck | April 10, 2009 - 13:25

People who don't write rarely understand. Even people who do write miss the point. Somehow we keep going. I hope that doesn't sound maudlin.

Ewan | April 10, 2009 - 13:29

I think you're right... I have the same problem with people who find out you speak more than one language, then give you fifteen pages of an ill written technical document and expect you to give it them back in an hour!