It's hard for you to kick against the pricks,
as Billy Shivers-Ale didn't exactly say.
What made you so mad about the bad
reception of your verse?
It was meant to – I think - provoke 'it stinks'
in commentaries hot and heated, but you
railed at misunderstanding and kept handing
critics insults and worse.
But most of all -your front; calling others words
that surely describe how you're looking now.
I'm sure you'll give your tit - return this tat -
using your favourite curse.
Comments
jennifer | December 11, 2008 - 10:27
Any gauntlet is enticing to me, it seems.
So whether this is directed at me or no, I have responded anyway, guilty as charged!
J x
Bradene | December 11, 2008 - 11:40
You don't have to be Einstein to know who this is aimed at. Personally I like to stay well out of his line of sight, once having been caught out of the corner of his eye! and whoa he's like the proverbial rotweiler (not sure how to spell that) well you get my drift. Good poem though Ewan Val
chuck | December 11, 2008 - 19:55
Will someone take it pers
Onally? And curse?
Or will it be seen as merely verse?
Or worse?
Light blue touch paper and reverse.
Macjoyce | December 11, 2008 - 21:30
You ninny.
www.myspace.com/norwichfacetransplant
chuck | December 11, 2008 - 21:55
Phew. I think you got off lightly Ewan.
Ewan | December 12, 2008 - 08:02
Good word though isn't it! I expected quite a different one; perhaps he read the poem through to the end.