Roller Coaster


from the ABC set Lovers, Liars and Just Good Friends.

We pay before we go, sit
excited in the carriage
- holding hands perhaps.
In the slow ascent,
there may be kissing.
At the top -screams and laughter.
If we open our eyes,
we can promise ourselves the world.
In the troughs, the headlong rush
stretches the happiness
from our faces.
Our wide-open eyes leak
tears, still streaming
when the ride is over.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | October 21, 2008 - 10:25

Loved this, Ewan:-) And congrats on the cherry, by the way.

Tina

artisus | October 21, 2008 - 12:17

very good !

luigi_pagano | October 21, 2008 - 12:39

No need for explanations. Excellent.

chuck | October 21, 2008 - 14:17

luigi beat me to it. All life in a few words. No exegesis required.

Bradene | October 21, 2008 - 14:29

It reminded me of my first marriage. Nice one Ewan. Val

Ewan | October 22, 2008 - 07:50

Thanks, all of you, for your very kind comments.

Ewan