I am


from the ABC set Dust

Swift,
like the wind;
I come for you.
Calm,
as the forest;
I speak to you.
Fierce,
as fire;
I fight for you.
Firm,
as a mountain;
I stand by you.
My Love.
For you;
I am.

x

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Comments

Mangone | January 12, 2010 - 16:20

Love it!
Not sure that it is wise to reveal the whole poem in the teaser though... maybe keep a little back to serve as a reward for those who choose to click on it :o)

kheldar | January 12, 2010 - 16:55

Short and sweet it may be(much like myself - apart from the sweet) but this poem conveys a magnitude of emotions - great stuff!

shoe | January 12, 2010 - 17:36

I clicked, and WAS rewarded,:~}}

Firebird | January 12, 2010 - 17:37

Thank you both so much. Really pleased you liked it.
(and thanks for the advice Mangone....will edit the teaser :)

Firebird | January 12, 2010 - 17:39

Thank you , thank you Shoe x:)

Mangone | January 12, 2010 - 18:09

Nicely judged Firebird!
The 6 comments are advert enough now anyway :O)

insertponceyfre... | January 12, 2010 - 18:55

I like this very much Firebird

MistakenMagic | January 13, 2010 - 09:50

Beautiful and very 'zen' poem, Firebird! Love the repetition ;)

Magic xxx

Firebird | January 13, 2010 - 14:12

Thank you both so much...really appreciate you taking the time to read it and commenting. Means a lot to me :x

flutterby-baby | January 20, 2010 - 02:49

'Fierce as fire I fight for you' resonates. Passionate, a piece written from the heart, enjoyed the ebb and flow and rhythm of your writing. :)

Firebird | January 21, 2010 - 16:15

Thank you flutterby-baby x:)

Firebird | January 21, 2010 - 16:15

Thank you flutterby-baby x:)