Catharsis


from the ABC set Stuff

Maybe all our stories
end in monochrome.

But I remember
winter stalking
a snow blue dawn,
when you were late that morning

and the gasping train
beat it`s wings impatiently
as you faltered across
a fierce concrete whiteness.

The faint blush of your hurry
and yesterday`s earrings
softly caught
the new sun`s half-light.

And I knew
you were fresh from sleep
and your lover.

As the journey began,
the frost-flecked fields which
burned for miles,
made small windows
in your eyes.

And the jasmine scent of you
touched what was left
of my soul.

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Comments

Nathan Bednarek | January 6, 2009 - 20:46

This is very touching and the imagery is great. The last stanza is a spit'n'polish finish. Well done.

Nathan.

Gilbert | January 7, 2009 - 15:28

Glad you liked it.
Thanks for the kind comments.

D.