The Ceroc Years - Number Four


from the ABC set The Ceroc Years

The Maiden

Pity pretty, blushing maid,
In the Dance-Hall’s gloomy shade:
Which seductive song’s caress
Could melt thy stern unwillingness.

In what far-flung land forlorn
Was this elfin maiden born?
Who the man dare brave the test
To win the heart beneath thy breast?

And what style and what knack
Might impel thee ’cross his back?
And as thy blood begins to race,
What sweet soul and what sweet face.

What the music? What the beat,
Will tempt those yet reluctant feet?
What the manner? What the charm?
What the hell, so where’s the harm?

When Pre-Raphaelites romanced,
Was it thy form they had glanced?
Lov’st thou Byrne-Jones and Rossetti,
Or the wealth of John Paul Getty?

Pity pretty, blushing maid,
In the Dance-Hall’s gloomy shade:
Which seductive song’s caress
Dare melt thy stern unwillingness.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | July 20, 2010 - 16:11

This could almost be shakespere,
a very beautiful poem, yes you certainly have a way
with words.
Jenny

h jenkins | July 20, 2010 - 16:16

Thanks Jennifer, glad you like it.
But no, not Shakespeare. Borrowed from William Blake instead.

Helvigo Jenkins

adora | July 21, 2010 - 15:32

Blake is one of my favourite poets and I thought that you mixed quite well with him. It is light and a really fun read.

h jenkins | July 22, 2010 - 16:22

Thank you. These ceroc poems are bathetic in the main so not really in keeping with Blake but I'd set myself to do homage to as many of the great poets as I could and I certainly couldn't leave him out.
Thanks again for the encouragement.

Helvigo Jenkins

berenerchamion | July 25, 2010 - 03:37

Love William Blake. This is superb.