She moves like sunlight through my every day
And turns my mornings languid and so slow
The afternoons that never go away
With evenings that will grow and overflow
Into the dark of night before we know
The day has gone, and I’ve so often said
I want an endless night, warm in her bed
I need to be with her in every way
From dawn and back to dawn the hours will grow
And turn as day becomes the night, ‘replay
These times again’ we whisper, ‘then bestow
Another day on us, the same, although
In darkness all our appetite is fed.’
I want an endless night, warm in her bed
Yet we are now exhausted from the fray
Our battle’s not fought, and we are not foe.
We lie here waiting for the sun’s first ray
No move made even though the room’s aglow
With day’s bright morning light, we will forego
The day to keep the night right here instead.
I want an endless night, warm in her bed
But when the mornings turn so cold and grey
And winter brings the coldest winds that blow
Across our days and bring the snow, we stay
Beneath these sheets, becomes our spring meadow
As days go dull as darker nights outgrow.
So when it seems those longer days have fled
I want an endless night, warm in her bed

Comments
skinner_jennifer | June 15, 2011 - 17:17
Hello hadley,
I really like this poem and it's beautifully
written.
Jenny.
insertponceyfre... | June 15, 2011 - 17:26
yes, I agree
RachelPatricia | June 15, 2011 - 18:12
Stunning, hadley - and great rhythm, too. Excellent stuff :)
Dynamaso | June 16, 2011 - 06:23
The repetition of the last line in each stanza is like a chorus for a beautiful song. I like it a lot!
Nathan Bednarek | June 19, 2011 - 17:47
"I need to be with her in every way
From dawn and back to dawn the hours will grow
And turn as day becomes the night, ‘replay
These times again’ we whisper, ‘then bestow
Another day on us, the same, although
In darkness all our appetite is fed.’
I want an endless night, warm in her bed"
I really sense the smooth passing of time in this stanza in the way you've crafted it.
A subject that isn't easy to write about, but you did it beautifully with that touch of honesty that is so crucial in writing.
What a joy to read. A huge well done from me.
Nathan.