I have found the poetry in this house,
sunk my fingers deep between the gaps
as if they were slabs of ginger cake.
While you tapped eggs on the rim of a bowl
one handed, I knocked the stones open
with a toffee hammer, pulled out liquorice
sentences like stray hairs from batter.
I have struck a pen to it like a tuning fork
listened to windows wolf-whistling at night,
while I lick royal icing from the wall
until my tongue hits marzipan.
Then you fold up your secrets
in a Swiss-roll carpet,
butter palms slip from the spoon,
the peppermint-cream ceiling melts
by morning we are at odds again.
Standing in the candy-can doorway
feet crunching on Demerara gravel
you say: ‘It’s nothing’
with glazé eyes and curdled breath.

Comments
Dynamaso | July 25, 2008 - 05:54
I love the clever use of sweets as imagery in this. The bitter-sweet edge to the last stanza makes it my favourite.
HaiAnh | July 25, 2008 - 07:52
Thank you dynamaso. x
capoeiragem | July 25, 2008 - 10:50
Delicious imagery (quite literally!), I liked how the protagonist slowly dismantles the house as they hungrily consume every last inch of poetry to be found within its walls, until finally there is nothing left.
Richard L. Prov... | July 28, 2008 - 02:18
Great imagery, and the poem is a consuming river of movement. Good stuff. RLP
MistakenMagic | August 19, 2008 - 15:12
Beautiful imagery! I can't possibly pick out my favourite part :) You've shown you're highly talented when it comes to figurative language.