A Jewel of Womankind


from the ABC set Poems 1

I keep the treasure guarded,
in the fortress of my mind.
Shrouded from on-lookers;
protected from prying eyes.

It is not just an image,
or a photo,
so sublime.
It is a casket full of wonderment;
a jewel of womankind.

It evokes a feeling from me:
Rawness,
un-refined.
And it leads me to a place,
that others would gladly die,

to find.

I am humble in its presence,
and would never question the design,
for the treasure that I hold so dear,

is the thought that you are mine.

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Comments

Highhat | October 9, 2010 - 13:11

Thank you for sharing this ;)

skinner_jennifer | October 9, 2010 - 13:42

How thought provoking, a private thought of someone
you love, I like this.
Jenny.

Mangone | October 9, 2010 - 19:34

I really liked this at first reading but I felt there was a word or two that could be lost.
As I pondered which and where I finally realised it was perfect and that the changes were needed only in the way I read it. A jewel!

Hal 9000 | October 10, 2010 - 15:06

Thanks Mangone. Very kind of you.