Moments

I enjoyed your poem. I like the "everything was gold" refrain. It gives the poem a nice mood.

Thanks. I overheard the line in the pub and ran off with it, thinking, this must fit in a poem! The irony of leaves looking beautiful when they are about to snuff it, was at the heart of it being an interesting phrase I think. Like the best bit of writing is in that moment when it's about to be over.

like the pauses... very much,