More Than Just a Hat

After the snow melted
And its ice tide had crawled away
Revealing the road again
We began to find things that we had lost;
mislaid.

For example: a woolen hat I'd bought you
as a birthday present lay, flattened by
car tyres, covered in black oil and dirt.

It lay there like a dead...jellyfish,
Washed up on a tarmac shore.

I bent to fish it out but you said:
"No. Leave it. It's too far gone."

I couldn't help but feel it was more than just
a hat that we were leaving behind; but it wasn't.

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Comments

shoe | February 20, 2010 - 10:51

Well deserved Pow, off now to read more of your work , can't think why I haven't already,:~}

harveyjoseph | February 20, 2010 - 12:56

Thanks for your encouragement!

Cavalcaderl | February 24, 2010 - 17:38

new harveyjoseph
ust read More Than Just a Hat.
good like the "stanza
it lay there like a jelly fish,
Washed up on a taramc shore.
well deserved cherry!
please write more!
julie

Anna Marie | May 3, 2010 - 13:07

Thought provoking imagery here. I really enjoyed this piece. I wish I had stumbled upon it earlier.

Anna