"Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose"
By Highhat
Sun, 02 Oct 2011
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To Janis:
Bag in hand,
closing the door;
the feeling is
overpowering;
all on your own now,
leaving a childhood behind-
no remorse,
no wrath,
just freedom to explore!
You’ve got nothing to lose
but a brand new life to gain.
You cast the shackles
of family life
and wonder if you’re
taking the love with you.
You’ll never know,
but you’re willing to risk it,
because this smells of freedom
and teen-spirit all in one.
You’re on top of it;
it doesn’t feel insurmountable.
So you smile
and give your boyfriend a hug.
Now the world’s at your feet
and each day is a new one.
You’ve got things to do
and you get them done because
of
the freedom
from before.
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Loved that song,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Loved that song, Pia;-)
Janis Joplin - one of the many who die 'too soon'; only in her mid-twenties, I believe...way back in 1970, I think. A tragic loss.
This poem is a fitting tribute to her life, which I enjoyed reading very much, and I wish you every success in the competition. A more than worthy entry.
Tina;-)
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Great read, always loved
Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on
Great read, always loved that song.
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Wonderful tribute Pia, like
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Wonderful tribute Pia,
like you said, she had 'nothing to loose,' she
probably did more in her short life, than we
do in a lifetime, so like you said 'Freedom' is
a word she went with.
I love this poem, because you have shown no fear
in taking life by the hand and going with it.
Really great stuff and good luck with the
competition.
Jenny.
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new Highhat Sad when it
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Highhat
Sad when it happens,
but all fledglings learn
to fly. Enjoyed this.
all the best comp;
julie
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