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Posted by Highhat on May 21, 2011 - 19:52

Stay close to me
Feel free
I tell you
The golden days are true

The sun rises in the early morning
Dew glistens in the dawning
Stay close to me
And you will see

We have our chance
For sweet romance
Stay with me for awhile
I’ll make you smile

I promise it’s true
I am here for you
And for you alone
This is our way home

Stay close
And see the golden day
It’s true
For me and for you

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | May 21, 2011 - 20:02

Hi pia,

I think the weather must be doing something good for
you, because this is so beautiful.

A poem that has such a natural feeling to it and
flows so well. Definitely one from the heart.

Jenny.

Highhat | May 21, 2011 - 20:14

;) Jenny
Thanks for reading and commenting
Pia

Silver Spun Sand | May 21, 2011 - 21:22

I agree; so very lovely, Pia and it would go so well set to music. A lyrical feel to the whole thing;-)

Tina

maisie | May 22, 2011 - 00:26

Druidic religious - song to the sun.

Highhat | May 22, 2011 - 07:35

Thank you very much Tina

;)Pia

Highhat | May 22, 2011 - 07:35

Thanks for reading and your comment Maisie

;)Pia

insertponceyfre... | May 22, 2011 - 16:27

yes I like this too Pia - it's very lyrical

Highhat | May 22, 2011 - 16:34

thank you for reading Insert

;)Pia

Cavalcaderl | May 26, 2011 - 21:58

new Highhat
Enjoyed this romantic poem,
So true, Stay close with me,
I have used quite a few times
in times of need.The last stanza to.
Stay close and see the golden day
It's true for me and for you.
To watch the sun rise, and go down
marvellous. A glowing red ball as it
seeps down over the horizon.
julie xx

Highhat | May 27, 2011 - 08:33

Thank you Julie for your truly poetic comment
Glad you enjoyed
;)Pia