The Pleasure-Dome


from the ABC set Sexploits

Bodies are packed
In a pleasure-dome:
tanned faces, sunburnt legs,
stripey shorts and sun-tops,
a bulge of breast.

A feckless youth:
long blond hair
and searching lips,
is praying mantis
to schoolboys.

Fruit machine Jackpot
Is pennies from heaven.
Perhaps a fiver will be kept back
For Lucy tonight, in the park.

A child sucks on a sugar dummy,
As her brother loses rainbow sweets
From a hole in his pocket.

All I desire is honey-bee ale
And phantasmagoria:
turquoise, green, canary and magenta.

A phial of elixir
Will traduce the glass,
In my physic garden.

Poppies and other opiates
Open their petals,
To colour the world
In a pleasure-dome.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | April 15, 2010 - 16:36

Oh, I love this Hilary...a marvellous mix of observation and delirium.

My favourite stanza:-

"All I desire is honey-bee ale
And phantasmagoria:
turquoise, green, canary and magenta."

And this one sent shivers down my spine:-

"A feckless youth:
long blond hair
and searching lips,
is praying mantis
to schoolboys."

Much enjoyed.

Tina

hilary west | April 16, 2010 - 10:02

Thanks for your generous comments SSS. I have just added the word 'other' in the last stanza to make more sense.

Silver Spun Sand | April 16, 2010 - 10:16

Yes - that is far more explicit, Hilary. It works very well. I like the orginality of this piece and its title is inspired;-)

Tina