iTwin
last night
i fell in love
with the aphex twin
and i felt the full emotion
of bleeps
and little squiggle noises
as a chord
i collected all the passion laced
expired breaths
tokens
for the dream archive
in the cupboard
(keepsakes
of special shiny things
a pressed dead daisy chain
a button
a kinder toy
old cinema tickets
the kiss i always wanted
from before we met)
last night i fell in love with
you
as you moved inside me
slowly
so
exquisitely slow
to goosebump my
skin
when we
laid down
with the aphex
twin

Comments
MistakenMagic | April 27, 2010 - 20:13
Wow, I really like this Drew! The short-line structure really works and helps the poem flow - well done ;)
Magic xxx
Anna Marie | June 10, 2010 - 18:02
I really like your style. Every piece I've read so far speaks volumes. The lines flow marvelously.
x Anna
iDrew | June 14, 2010 - 00:39
Sorry for the delayed reply but thank you both, truly.
xDrew