Beach Hotel


from the ABC set Poems

Is anything sadder
than ageing Brits
and ageing Germans
lounging in the sun?
Does anything impel you
to end your life so young?

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Comments

Luly Whisper | March 15, 2010 - 20:18

It might be worth trying to condense this into a haiku. - Just a suggestion.

nametaken | March 15, 2010 - 21:56

Brits are fatter than krauts.

johnshade | March 16, 2010 - 08:12

obese rosbifs
turn pink on white loungers -
exhaust in the car.

johnshade | March 16, 2010 - 22:50

fat Brits, fatter krauts,
sun on an empty pool -
sheets make a noose.