saga

Cherry

By jvriesema

Wed, 28 Jun 2023
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In the wind,

whispers  of your conversation

drift across the scent of coffee brewing 

while strands of wool

weave your heart into mine...

your smile

long ago..

the wind taking my breath away 

when i saw  you fall into my eyes

upon a wind swept lava field ;

a dream   found its own footsteps;

like

a rhythym that fell into a snowstorm

a saga waking into into iits own reality.

 

 

Certificate 15
Poem

Comments

Submitted by Sooz006 on

I get and can identify with every line of this.Sometimes poetry makes me think too hard to get the meaning, and I scratch my head until a little pile of sawdust builds up on my desk.
Short, sweet, simple beautiful, and one letter too long to be perfect (iits).

Beautiful writing. My Favourite line is: 

whispers  of your conversation

drift across the scent of coffee brewing (because it does, both real time and on playback, doesn't it?)

Lovely.