On Walking Home.


from the ABC set Short Tales.

Late one evening on my walk home from work, when the leaves were browning in the amber sun and my mind was worrying at the pavement, I came upon a man in a phone box who had no hands.
It had been a tiresome day of work and my feet were sore from the walk. So, with head lowered and shoulders hunched, I continued on my way past the iron and glass phone box and the predicament within. I was no more than ten paces past however, when a sudden flutter of my mind seized me. I turned and to my surprise saw the handless man gazing, even staring with blatant curiosity at my face. I stepped forward and opened the door of the phone box. The man spoke.
“Excuse me, sir. I was wondering if you could help me; as you can see, I have no hands and cannot use this phone. I have an extremely important call to place- could you dial the number for me? I would not ask were it not so important.”
Despite his precise and eloquent speech, the man was clearly uncomfortable; his eyes darting over my face as he spoke. I looked at the man and considered his request. A slow anger was churning within me- how dare this man, this handless man insult me so? I felt as if he had spat on my face. My fists shook with rage and sweat burned over my body.
I turned away sharply and ran until I was out of sight of the phone box. I gave myself a moment to calm down on a nearby park bench. I watched the clouds flow across the sky. I loosened my collar, took my handkerchief and dapped at my neck, at my forehead and at the pale stretch of skin on my face, where a mouth should be.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | September 21, 2008 - 20:35

An interesting story,keleph - allegorical almost. You throw many issues into the bull-ring.

Very original and a more than worthwhile read.

Tina

keleph | September 22, 2008 - 19:57

Thanks very much, Tina. Glad you said allegorical- exactly the feel I was going for.

Organic Love machine | February 1, 2009 - 02:53

wow, weird.

makes me realise I can write about anything..