My Hands

Small for an adult man
they remain unblemished,

skin no longer taut,
knuckles tiny knots

of weathered cherrywood,
the palm patterns, for

so long ignored,
now warily examined

for the secret code
of my existence.

My hands continue their
busy ways - stabbing

at keyboards, grasping air,
turning and twisting the

intricate objects that
help move me through the day.

Their work is constant
and carried out in silence,

the grooming of our bodies,
the stroking of your hair

the slow descent of my palms
along your thigh the most pleasurable

tasks of all. Sometimes you take
my hands in yours and we compare:

your fingers, slender stems of expectation
unlike mine - too stiff with age now

to grapple with those minor
chords and serenade you to sleep.

The gold signet ring embedded
in my skin still shines -

a token illumination of my
hands' everlasting value.

Just promise me one thing: when my
hands have served their time

let them rest together, conjoined,
entwined, in imitation of the

love they found.

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Comments

russiandoll | July 16, 2009 - 08:37

Beautiful, well done.

Kilb50 | July 16, 2009 - 08:37

Many thanks russiandoll. Much appreciated!

Jupiter | July 16, 2009 - 08:44

I really enjoyed this piece too Kilb50. Thanks :-)

Kilb50 | July 16, 2009 - 08:46

Thanks Jupiter!

Jupiter | July 16, 2009 - 08:54

Sorry - forgot to say how clever I found the secret code idea :-). Nice one. Got me looking at my own palms now ... lol

so long ignored,
now warily examined

for the secret code
of my existence.

Sikander | July 16, 2009 - 18:39

A agree with above comments - a truly beautiful love poem. I loved the play around 'immitation'; the fact that you give us, in just a few glimpses, the past, present and future of a tender and loving relationship. Great work.

threeleafshamrock | July 17, 2009 - 15:41

As already iterated; Beautiful!

Chris

sarah wilson | July 18, 2009 - 08:31

Agree with all of the above:)

Cavalcaderl | July 20, 2009 - 21:14

new kib50
beautul agree Russian
Doll and all.
julie cavalcader

scoot | August 10, 2009 - 12:16

touching, without being at all sentimental. It's like an intimate portrait, shown through hands alone. Great.
Karen