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Posted by LawOfTheOne on June 1, 2008 - 00:20
from the ABC set Poems

Your over-the-top love
ferments in my stomach
erodes innards
strips layers from my heart
and eventually spews out
gnaws at your thick skin
seeps in any crevice or orifice
until your varnished eyes fill up
and cry my acid

then you'll drown.

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Doeslittle | June 1, 2008 - 19:02

This is short and not very sweet, but works well. I liked 'cry my acid' and 'varnished eyes' especially.

keleph | June 1, 2008 - 23:43

lol, who's the lucky girl?

LawOfTheOne | June 2, 2008 - 02:01

Thanks for the feedback doeslittle and keleph. Yeah it ain't sweet but it was my mood at the time. Girl? Lucky?