i'm sitting here all alone
not a soul around
i wonder, and wonder
with no sign, nor sound
feeling trapped
closed in
all i do
is flap and swim
from one reed
to another
in search
of a brother
finally one day
a floating worm
made me feel
the tide has turned
i ponder closer
for a curious look
only to be fooled
it's really a hook!
i swim as hard as i can
only its too late
the hook sunk in
and sealed my fate
a dream come true
short and sweet
i'm out the pond
i wish i had feet

Comments
Lady-Bathsheba | November 16, 2009 - 12:31
Great poem :)
leeboy87 | November 16, 2009 - 12:34
thank you from your next door neighbour
richard says hello
Lady-Bathsheba | November 16, 2009 - 12:37
Hello Richard , I hope your not corrupting him with your crazy mind!!!
Lady-Bathsheba | November 16, 2009 - 13:31
Sorry forgot to say "Hi" to new neighbour as well
Hope your all settled in ok.
richielee70 | November 16, 2009 - 15:22
brilliant idea like the feet at the end , good work lee
beaste | May 5, 2012 - 16:15
luv your poem, its not until the very last line (see the pun) where you realize its about a fish. Nicely done =-)