Little Alice Longshanks,
bounded into view,
waved her fun gold bangled arms,
at her cookie cutter crew.
Doughballs at the ready,
trays already greased,
flour dusted surface,
oven temperature increased.
The party's almost starting
but for just one thing;
no one bought the icing sugar
Argggghhh,
Cakes without the bling!
'How lame is that?' said Alice,
'Whatever' said her mates,
'I guess we'll have to improvise,
da boyz are due at eight.'
'I've got some greaseproof paper,
we could always make a frill'
said her flour dusted mother,
'It would still give them a thrill'
'U R kidding' Alice shrieked,
'Frills are just not mean,
my crew will die of horror,
they're almost in their teens'
Thinking fast,
mum saved their face,
with just a bag of sweets;
brightly shone the M&Ms'
on all the girly treats.

Comments
Ewan | June 16, 2009 - 07:12
First LOL of the day...
Bit cheeky that arggh! No-one can say it won't scan... you'll just give it enough syllables won't you?
lenchenelf | June 16, 2009 - 07:26
Thank you very much, the 'Cry' could be yodelled for added effect :-)) all the best Lena
DraxB | June 16, 2009 - 16:15
nice, fun piece.
threeleafshamrock | June 16, 2009 - 17:12
Cool! ;)
Chris
lenchenelf | June 16, 2009 - 19:16
Thanks DraxB & Chris :-) atb Lena
littleditty | June 16, 2009 - 22:59
very twee funny and sweet as the cakes fun. 'Cakes without the bling!' lol, enjoyed :)
lenchenelf | June 16, 2009 - 23:46
Hellooo little D :-) we know not to come between 'fierce' girls and their finger food choice....dangerous!
all the best and thanks lena
littleditty | June 17, 2009 - 09:59
The CookieCutter Crew -i may have to put them in a story with the infamous imaginary concept band i'm in - if that's ok? The Fallopian Tubes meet the CookieCutters - oh my my! boggles! lol - xx
lenchenelf | June 17, 2009 - 10:40
It could work, with you as MC :-)) Rock and rooolll!