Only a monitor flickered
in the grasp of silence,
where my sadness
and your curiousity meet.
We await third party verdict;
eye gaze locked
to middle window, distance.
Geometric urban shades,
capsulated departments,
encapsulate thought
in strictly titred dosage;
cross reaction noted
and dismissed.
Spring sun strays a ray,
traces contours of your face
to play a smile in my sombre;
now, I perceive you,
beyond the holding hum
of background mechanisms
embalmed in hospital green.
Beautiful, fragile humanity
in the clasp of silence,
where your curiousity
and my sadness greet.
2006
minor edit 29.12.09

Comments
threeleafshamrock | March 23, 2009 - 12:50
Beautiful, sad and utterly believable. Nice take on the I.P. and certainly inspirational in any case.
Chris
celticman | March 23, 2009 - 15:22
wonderful.
Yutka | March 23, 2009 - 17:28
a stunning expression of grief
lenchenelf | March 23, 2009 - 23:55
Thank you for reading, Chris, CelticMan and Yutka, your comments are appreciated. atb L
Dynamaso | March 24, 2009 - 05:45
I really like the third stanza but the whole piece is very good indeed.
lenchenelf | March 24, 2009 - 08:16
Thanks very much Dynamaso, atb L