Touching Base

Posted by lenchenelf on February 5, 2009 - 02:18
from the ABC set Infinity plus one

I awoke in confusion
From nightmares of loss
To your smiles,
A profusion
Of hot butterscotch

Melting down fears
As a new day unfolds
Its promise of you
And all that you hold.

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Oh that is really lovely. A little gem Val x

I know the feeling of both (nightmares/melting down fears). Very good poem.
cheers
Artisus

Thank you Val & Artisus :-) atb L

Short, but oh so sweet!

J x

Ta J :-) atb L

Hmmm, well Valentines' day is just around the corner!
Nice one mate! Says a little; means a lot. As it should be.

Chris

Thank you Chris, all the best L