I imagined it to come easily, quick snatch of pain and tears and truth
but it has just come so damn teasingly, I’ve realized it has been a longer route
Now there’s only numbness, no ache, no cry, no fear
only empty-, hopeless state, no truth, no hate… oh dear!
I thought it comes as my punishment for all the nasty acts I’ve done
but all in all it seems to be the lonesome way of God just having fun.
And so I sit here, hold my heart and soul in hands
think of you, your amazing eyes and adoring girlish fans
Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear… you know… it just hit me with the hardest strike…
I didn’t just lose a friend… but the love of my life…
Comments
lyssagurl_l0l | December 6, 2009 - 18:31
hello, liisu, i see you are new here, but this is great anyway.
"Now there’s only numbness, no ache, no cry, no fear
only empty-, hopeless state, no truth, no hate… oh dear!"
BEAUTIFUL!! i hope to see more by you, and i can't wait to read your next peice! :D
~:)alyssa(:~
Liisu | December 7, 2009 - 17:35
I´m glad you liked it! :)
Liisu
Cavalcaderl | December 7, 2009 - 22:22
new Liisu
hello' a very warm welcome
abctales if your new.Very sad
but at least you managed to say
and help's us all when we can,
and learn by that for other's.
sometimes.I find busier you are
it help's Longing to read more of your's
cavalcaderl x julie (:-
Chundar | March 8, 2010 - 05:34
It is always the way with the loss of a very close friend, that gut stretching hurt that refuses to permit even a single tear when its all you want to do. Its a place I seam to have been foolish enough to visit more than once and probably will again, but even so I have not been able to find such eloquent words as these
Liisu | March 9, 2010 - 20:36
To Chundar: Thank you! :) Just wrote down my true feelings at the time ;)
Chundar | March 9, 2010 - 21:00
When ever Ive been there my true feelings push the pen through the paper, perhaps I should get something to lean on when I write. I do have a fairly good piece but it is unfinished, I seam to have run out of steam to bring it to a satisfying conclusion
Liisu | March 10, 2010 - 05:54
:) The leaning point might be good!
Well, and if the strongest, pushy feeling has vanished, just make the ending based on the feelings you have at the moment..maybe! ;) Actually cant wait to read it, exciting! :)
Chundar | March 10, 2010 - 14:29
thanks