Weather Report 2

Cherry

By liplash

Mon, 06 Apr 2009
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2 comments
 

I’m at the Skatepark
Visibility poor
If it’s a factor it’s high
It’s all girls
And it’s all about boys
Who have not replied
And what do I have?
A broken DVD
And a son, who runs at the last minute to the Co-op for rice
How little we all are
Going too high on the swings
When there’s no reply

Certificate U
Poem
Ageing Gothic Mother
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Dynamaso on
This is a lovely short piece, quite evocative and very enjoyable.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
The last line sent a shiver down my spine. Nice writing here. Much enjoyed. Silver:-)