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Posted by littleditty on November 2, 2007 - 14:29
from the ABC set whimsy

When you sneak unnoticed across the sky
Lift my chin and want to meet my tired eyes
Take my low bowed head in light outspread arms
Your arrival is so dear to me
That the unrecognisable woman
I will become at sunset
Is the unknown child
Met.

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anipani | November 4, 2007 - 11:24

anipani says, wonderful poem, resonant, picture making, i love meeting myself like this, i would ahve written this if i could. you wrote it for me! ani

littleditty | November 4, 2007 - 18:05

hey! a comment! thank you ani - i'm glad you enjoyed it - i wonder if we get a notification that there is a comment...tis a whole new world - nice this new comment business - i appreciate it -thanks for stopping by ani...cheers, Nicky x