like the thread that a spider spins
have you caught me in a sticky web
and will you haunt me forever in my dreams
it was grey and wet the sound of trains people rushing everywhere the words came out in a high pitched squeak and we both knew my words were false yet full of a confirmation that was never going to happen, there was no way I would have let you push me in one of those things and so there was no future in these words
in my dream the memory came back yet how could I now say to someone else, in the front of the station in a glass room they are there you could bring one to me, it was only yesterday after all, the vision is clear we played ping pong side by side then not as we walked along why I do not know, you looked I looked at the people and there you were again by my side, it was day then but now I am in the darkness of the night
you awoke me from my sleep the vision that you sent me and your presence in my dream was so clear it was touchable real it scared me and I awoke, upon reflection I wonder wonder were you trying to help me or .....
like the thread that a spider spins
have you caught me in your sticky web
and will you haunt me forever in my dreams

Comments
Highhat | September 6, 2011 - 07:02
Very good Jackie- it works very well without punctuation- gives good meaning. Well done..
;)Pia
Louise178 | September 6, 2011 - 07:41
Thank you Pia and thanks ABC for my cherry :)
Silver Spun Sand | September 6, 2011 - 07:42
Excellent, Louise, and the way it comes full circle, ties in beautifully with the spider imagery.
Tina
Louise178 | September 6, 2011 - 07:56
Thank you Tina :)
skinner_jennifer | September 6, 2011 - 12:10
Hi Louise 178,
This was such a haunting - beautifully written piece,
wonderful read.
Congratulations on the well deserved cherries.
Jenny.
Louise178 | September 6, 2011 - 14:12
Thank you very much Jenny :)