Picking up pebbles and throwing them into the sea
Watching the white foam roll them all back to me
The days of my childhood I throw for the sea
Watch the white surf washing them all back for me
Wouldn’t it be good if clocks could be turned back in years
Oh how I wish we could re-live the laughter and tears
The dreams of my childhood I throw for the sea
Watch the white waves drifting them all back for me
Picking up pebbles and throwing them into the sea
Watching the white surf carry them all back to me
Draft
2011 Of Salt
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Comments
Nolan | May 23, 2010 - 19:35
Picking up pebbles,
Cornelia - - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hPB5_TjKJug
Matt Flinders - - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JG8DhfhucbM
vidit.chopra | May 23, 2010 - 19:57
Yup me too...I wish I was 10 year old again!
Nice.
Vidit
Beeme | May 23, 2010 - 20:36
Very much enjoyed, like the repetition, worked very well in my opinion. I think the simplicity makes this very beautiful as well as the images of 'the white surf' , sounds very tranquil and beautiful.
Beeme xx
Nolan | May 23, 2010 - 21:09
Thank you young lady! Your comments are cherished! &&
Cavalcaderl | May 24, 2010 - 09:35
new Nolan
Like this very much,Surf the Wash
of the sea.Beautiful calming,
and the pebbles.Maybe it
could make a rap song?
This is a little Red gem?
julie x
Nolan | May 24, 2010 - 09:55
A ruby, a drop of blood &&
darkenwolf | August 2, 2010 - 16:32
Waves in the waters of life?
Nolan | January 19, 2011 - 21:51
&
John Denver
Lost and alone on some forgotten highway
Travelled by many remembered by few
Looking for something that I can believe in
Looking for something that I’d like to do with my life
I don’t know what the future is holding in store
I don’t know where I’m going I’m not sure where I’ve been
There’s a spirit that guides me a light that shines for me
My life is worth the living I don’t need to see the end
Sweet sweet surrender, live live without care
Like a fish in the water, like a bird in the air
There’s nothing behind me and nothing that ties me
To something that might have been true yesterday
Tomorrow is open right now it seems to be more
Than enough to just be here today
Sweet sweet surrender, live live without care
Like a fish in the water, like a bird in the air
~ ~ ~
Nolan | January 19, 2011 - 21:57
You fill up my senses
Like a night in a forest
Like the mountains in springtime
Like a walk in the rain
Like a storm in the desert
Like a sleepy blue ocean
&
Come let me love you
Let me give my life to you
Let me drown in your laughter
Let me die in your arms
Let me lie down beside you
Let me always be with you
&
Come let me love you
Come love me again
&
A Country Boy
Cavalcaderl | January 27, 2011 - 11:37
New Nolan
Great poem and of child hood.
They are bringing back re; surf poem
"Hawii Five O" series or films on surfing.
I love "John Denver's "You Fill Up My Senses"
our day centre music groups we used to do,and
I tried sing sometimes have music I bought,can't
play or read shame not that clever minded.
Have a nice week-end.
julie x
Nolan | January 27, 2011 - 12:37
~ ۷ ۸ ~ Annie's Song is ecstatic,
Bob Dylan's Wedding Song even more so ~ ~ ۸ ۷ ~ ~
Cavalcaderl | January 28, 2011 - 17:23
new Nolan
Thankyou comment.
Don't know that one Bob Dylan's
Song shame sounds nice must get
Ray to find the music and words.
What tune does it remind you of.
"Ave Maria". Then one She Wears My Ring.
Very cold out So keeping new boots for another day.
julie x
Nolan | May 10, 2011 - 14:47
The Main-Deep
The long, rolling,
Steady-pouring,
Deep-trenchèd
Green billow:
The wide-topped,
Unbroken,
Green-glacid,
Slow-sliding,
Cold-flushing,
On–on–on–
Chill rushing,
Hush-hushing,
Hush–hushing. . .
~ ~ ~
James Stephens
the unfolding head | June 21, 2011 - 11:05
really enjoyed this... it conjured up lots of memories, melancholic and heart warming.