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Posted by pheonix-rising on June 27, 2009 - 21:38

Seventeen things
I start at once,
and none seem to end,
they lay there
unfinished
for a year and a day,
For I’ve no time to spend.

Seventeen things
I start at once,
I never follow through,
my space clogged
with stories and pictures,
words and colours missing,
still something left to do.

Seventeen things
I start at once,
it never seems to end,
I can’t ever finish
what I start,
I still do it to this day,
Everything follows a

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Comments

Dendrite | June 27, 2009 - 22:59

heh heh, really nice. Why pick 17? Is there some interior pattern I'm missing, or is th

sarah wilson | June 28, 2009 - 07:36

I know how you feel! Congratulations on the cherry!
sarah x

pheonix-rising | June 28, 2009 - 07:37

Thanks, and no, there was no reason for seventeen, it just seemed to go nicely :P
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phoenix

whiskey | June 28, 2009 - 09:02

Oh yes, a feeling I know only too well, lol!

DraxB | June 28, 2009 - 09:32

Yes, can identify with this. Well put.

pheonix-rising | June 28, 2009 - 16:56

Thanks, all of you for your lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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phoenix

morgan-g | June 28, 2009 - 18:04

That was great - you're in my mind! Fantastic end

SundaysChild | June 28, 2009 - 21:13

Great piece. Well done on the cherry :)

brainbox11 | June 29, 2009 - 10:11

wow. :D this is great! well done getting cherrypicked and i cant believe youre only 14! lucky you on the cherry. keep writing

Bekka :D

pheonix-rising | July 11, 2009 - 14:00

Thanks very much :)
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phoenix