Heartbreaking

Deceitful eyes, she's got those 'come get me' thighs.
She's the only one, who knows how low she can go.
She speaks the lines that can control my mind.
Wherever she goes I know my eyes will follow.
She blew a kiss, which was not meant for me.
She knows I know, yet thinks that I can't see.
She's having an affair, sex with another man.
I think to myself, I just can't understand.
Her only goal, is to deceive and take control.
And, I can't believe that I can't say 'no'.

(Chorus)
Deceitful eyes.
All those lies,
Trying to hurt me.
Control my mind.
She wants me bad,
She wants me dead.
She can't make up her mind.
I don't understand.
Why she's heartbreaking.

She plays a game with such an innocent face.
i didn't know heartbreaking, was her main case.
Her actions confess and puts me through a test.
To decide whether I should keep her or just let her go.
I've been good to her, but she's just shallow.
But I hope in time, that she'll realise,
I'm onto her game and shell get played the same.

(Chorus)
Deceitful eyes.
All those lies,
Trying to hurt me.
Control my mind.
She wants me bad,
She wants me dead.
She can't make up her mind.
I don't understand.
Why she's heartbreaking.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | November 7, 2010 - 14:56

This is such a sad poem of deceit, so bad when
people are cruel to one another. You tell it
really well.
Jenny.

pinda | November 7, 2010 - 15:04

Yes, deciet is a very sad topic.

Thanks for reading :)

X
Pinda

Beeme | November 7, 2010 - 17:57

Sad, but very well written. I eally enjoyed Pinda :)

Beeme xx

pinda | November 7, 2010 - 19:32

Thank you beeme :)
How've you been, I haven't seeen you on here recently? I read the poem 'free' last night however, was too busy to post a comment, sorry about that. Anyway it was really good and I enjoyed it because I miss your style of writing. Don't ever feel your work isn't good because I'll always love to read your poems. You and Jupiter were one of the main reasons I would log in on this site when I joined. Your young-fresh-talented.

Do what you do best, carry on writing

Pinda

Beeme | November 8, 2010 - 15:15

I've been ok,thanks for the encouragement, I'm sure itsjust a phase. I'm sure I'll feel more confident about my writing again soon! (crosses fingers. I hope you've been well.

Beeme xx