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Love On Ink

Posted by pinda on June 16, 2009 - 14:35
from the ABC set Love on Ink *HAIKU*

My emotions scribed .
On empty loose leafs,
where my Pens ink heart beat fills.
Knowing no dimes or riches coming.
I don't hesitate to cry with my ink.
Even though I know it won't bring bills.
I do it for the moment.
A dedication to the past.
Just praying to God.
That my words to my daughter.
Will forever last.

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Beeme | June 16, 2009 - 15:43

Really enjoyed this. You poems get getting even better.(:

I especially liked the lines;
"My emotions scribed .
On empty loose leafs,
where my Pens ink heart beat fills."

Well done

Best wishes
Beeme (:

pinda | June 16, 2009 - 15:56

Thanks Beeme glad you enjoyed,always good to hear what you think.
:)

Peace Pinda
x

Beeme | June 16, 2009 - 16:05

Your welcome, it's always nice to hear what you think. (:

Highhat | April 8, 2011 - 12:42

I agree with Beeme- It's always nice to hear what you think Pinda. You express exactly my sentiments as I would not be able to myself. Thank you. It's great to be reminded of such awareness. Just leave the thugs behind. ;D
cheers
;)Pia