Love you^^

Love,so valuable in its own ways.
Love,puts me into providence.
Of my own games.
Lost everyone I loved,through doubt & pain.
Pray to God,God make some rain.
To wash away my dreams of success.
An wash away the stain,leaked by the devil.
Still I rise through the greed,power,an evil.
Seems God had a plan for me.
Still,I'm blinded by the light of the beautiful sea.
What do you do,when life is a drama?
Still,moves you make,result in the rule of karma.

I love you Damien Jacob Leaper,close friend,Brother too.
I love you Sarah J. Simpson,my carer,Mom an bets friend.
I love you Tina,my real Mother,who gave birth to the soldier.
But I'm scared in this cold world.
Just want ot grab you,like a baby an hold cha.

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Comments

sarah wilson | May 27, 2009 - 11:31

Really feel this Pinda especially the last verse. Check for typos though, cos it spoils the end result:)

tarashannon | June 3, 2009 - 14:09

For some reason I like the typos.. I think the accent and typos add effect