Money makes the world go around *Snippet*


from the ABC set Blood,cash and guns!

Me, I've been and hollered around the world a good six times.
Seen the dollar, pound, and the rupee and any other poison dime.
Thinking the capital is the finace for every thought out crime.
Just thinking about money, makes me cringe about rapping this line.
Feel like the state of America going to squeeze me for a fine.
Shit like this makes our kids result to the option of no good lying.
No wonder the dollar is the worlds biggest issue.
Remember one night, it made my Ma stay up the wole night crying.
Thinking how she going to feed her son,
Thinking how she going to pay for protection.
From local gangs helping by loading the gun.
Money isn't everything, but everything is money.
So surely the world is made out of paper or something.

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Comments

pinda | July 9, 2009 - 23:57

Thanks for the cherry ABC Tales

threeleafshamrock | July 10, 2009 - 08:18

Like this one Pinda. It says a lot in a short piece and holds together well; love the last two lines - kinda says it all.

CHRIS ;)

Beeme | July 10, 2009 - 08:37

Well done of the cherry!! :)
This was the best line for me;
'Just thinking about money, makes me cringe about rapping this line.'

Beeme

pinda | July 10, 2009 - 10:15

Thanks 3leaf, Haven't been around but will check out your work I missed

pinda | July 10, 2009 - 10:16

Thanks Beeme,glad you liked. :)
Aghhh I see you have competition going on.

Best of luck.

Beeme | July 10, 2009 - 10:35

Thanks Pinda, don't know how I'm going to beat Sunday or Jupiter though! lol :)

It's all about the taking part..

sarah wilson | July 11, 2009 - 12:52

Well deserved cherry Pinda. very thought provoking piece. Good stuff:) sarah x

Nathan Bednarek | July 22, 2009 - 14:39

'Money isn't everything, but everything is money.'

So very true! A well deserved cherry.

Nathan ;-)

Cavalcaderl | August 2, 2009 - 08:32

New Pinda this is absolutely true!
Congrats; on the Cherry well done!
my belated dad said buy anything with money!
The Beatles say "Can't Buy Me Love" "
I don't care to much for money"
But can't do much without it can one.
I buy "The Big Issue every week" but they don't
get much on charge of it.I think how lucky I and some are.
Julie x