(Chorus)
They want to see me bleed.
Crush my heart and destroy my seed.
They want to see me bleed.
They be jealous over me,as I succeed.
They want to see me bleed.
Buried me to see me leak,
As they know blood is thicker than water.
They want to see me heive.
We all have haters,who always hate on our visions and pride.
Will never go away until the day we die,or we can just hide.
But they will find us eventually and then we in pure danger.
Like the zoo key missing,and the lions infront of the park ranger.
They never go away,just leave the remains.
Don't wash their faces after dinner,because they aren't vain.
To them this game is just chasing us,who want to do well.
Kill us,beat us still knowing they got to face the court and the jail cell.
Only man I can trust to watch my back is God,he always there.
Always ringing the chruch bells.
That is when I know,that he really care.
(Chorus)
They want to see me bleed.
Crush my heart and destroy my seed.
They want to see me bleed.
They be jealous over me,as I succeed.
They want to see me bleed.
Buried me to see me leak,
As they know blood is thicker than water.
They want to see me heive.
I want to make history,next to Ali and Shakur.
All you thinking about is the plans of doom in your drawer.
Prevent me from becoming made and signing a tour.
To reck my life,to kill my soul.
Ruining all that is your puropose and goal.
It's a damn shame you still thinking about Brooklyns local.
Me I'm aiming high,for a million dollar studio,laying my vocals.
Cut me,shoot me and do what you want.
Making me die,will just make you get shot.
Because i got family and friends that care.
Drop my hand,I know they going to be there.
Your a pest inside my head.
Get the fuck out of my hair,
Before your banished and finally declared dead.

Comments
sarah wilson | June 9, 2009 - 13:52
Another really strong piece. I particularly like the analogy with the lion:
"Lose the zoo key......
"To them this game is chasing us who want to do well"
Good stuff sarah x
jennifer | June 9, 2009 - 15:06
You should put a space after every comma to be correct - it's hard to read without.
Also, a little guide to help:
your = possessive
you're = you are
J x
pumadelta | June 9, 2009 - 16:27
yes pinda...like this one its raw and im sure its sound good as a rap....sounds like me and you both been in some wars...keep hope alive...
Jupiter | June 9, 2009 - 18:03
Hi Pinda.
Like the zoo key missing,and the lions infront of the park ranger.
My idea of justice mate ;-) although I would prefer it to be the zoo keeper rather than the ranger ;)
Do you have anywhere on the net we can listen to your stuff by any chance?
pinda | June 10, 2009 - 11:31
Thanks Jennifer,my grammer and stuff might be bad sometimes because I'm not brilliant at it.But I will try :)
pinda | June 10, 2009 - 11:32
Thanks Jupiter,not at the moment mate,I'll let you know when I do