If you don't smile
Daily, how will the
Angels know where too
Find you, and guide
You along your passage
of life.
Taking you through,
Much delight.
Helping you rise when
Your darkest days
Hit, and hit hard they will.
Then gives you a friendly hand
Up,for another fresh start.
Comments
RachelPatricia | August 10, 2011 - 14:12
This certainly made me smile, Prettyrose, so hopefully the angels have spotted me and are guiding me right now. I think my angels like caffeine, as I suddenly have a strong urge to make my way towards the kettle... ;oD
Very much enjoyed, thank you! :)
Rachel xx
Prettyrose | August 10, 2011 - 14:51
LOL Rachel, I know what you mean, my angel likes the kettle but not enough to make me a drink, hehe.
Thank you again for making the time to read my work, I do appreciate it and it makes me want to carry on when if just 1 lovely person like yourself, gets either enjoyment or help :)))
I have added a couple words to my poem that niggled you lol I hope you like :)
I love your user name :)
Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)
Trish ;) x
skinner_jennifer | August 11, 2011 - 09:27
Hello prettyrose,
do you know I nearly missed this poem, it was Pia
that guided me to it and I'm so glad she did.
Being a great believer in Angels, I could relate
to your poem so much. Sometimes when the pressure
of life takes over, we can forget as humans that
our Angels are there, but reading your beautiful
poem, brings it all flooding back again.
Thankyou for a wonderful read, I really loved it.
Jenny.
Prettyrose | August 11, 2011 - 11:41
Hi Julie :) Thank you again for taking the time and appreciate all you said.
For me Julie its always been about getting a message across to people, to hopefully help them or make them think& about others or just smile even for 1 day. It's not for me, much about grammar or being so precise, whether ill or not.
And that's what I like about this site, you can be yourself and no one judges or expects one lol to be like them, because our writing ways are different like people are in every day life.
Yes thank you, I will try doing what you said has I like music, and I hope you are relaxing best you can.
Take Care
Julie :)
Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)
Trish x
Prettyrose | August 11, 2011 - 11:50
Hi Jenny, I hope your well.
Thank you for your really lovely comments, it means a lot to me when people read them and then when I have comments like yours it really does mean such a lot :)
I originally meant it for a quote so it was originally just a couple of lines, but then I carried on, Now I wished I had added more, but I am half way through another poem about angels so left it short, really glad you liked it and yes I agree we humans concentrate far more on bad and forget so much that's good or the good that guides us :)
Take care
Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)
Trish x
Cavalcaderl | August 11, 2011 - 19:14
new Prettyrose Liked this poem angel's very much.
Used to be like you, put it in the right way,mean never previewed what I had typed, all my mistakes then. As had to focus difficult,cos whatever in life,
doing have to concentrate and do right! So try to scribble first, type poem story on, hoping the right stanzas are in the right way express what I do. If pressure,or things gone wrong, not the right for time typing properly. Or not my glasses on.Like singing the same! Then it all comes out better,
take care, hope your not in too much pain. Play quiet music and relax. Have to share the computer!
Yes, because of myself,I have done this and for other
people, feel so better and relaxed. Just corrected
mistakes and diction of this ok.Now song
"If I can help somebody" my living shall not be in vain.have a good week-end.
julie xx