If life was like a Dolphins
surroundings, wouldn't it be
So enchanted.
Worries and hate lifted
By the calm still waters
And their natural ability
to welcome all who embrace
Them.
Yet would destroy those
Who try to harm their simple
Yet happy world.
They know others are
not far away, but let them
Be, has long has they
Don't cross the barrier
Of their home.
So equal life could be
For all,just swimming
Around in an heaven of
Innocence and waterfalls
Of peace.
Comments
Highhat | August 5, 2011 - 04:57
I don't think dolphins are ignorant- quite contrary.
Prettyrose | August 5, 2011 - 13:30
Hi highhat, thank you for taking the time to read my work again. many thanks for your comments.
I was referring to ignorance has a good thing. and how they do not know what the world is like how humans bicker and fight, pick at things and kill each other every second of every day, maybe that was not portrayed has i would hope. so thanks for pointing that out.
Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)
Highhat | August 5, 2011 - 13:56
I'm glad you changed it to innocence- well done Prettyrose
atb
;)Pia
Prettyrose | August 5, 2011 - 22:14
Thanks Pia.
Sorry what does atb stand for lol.
Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)
Highhat | August 6, 2011 - 06:00
atb= all the best- ;D
Prettyrose | August 7, 2011 - 15:15
oh thank you lol
you to a.t.b :)))))