I want to make the
wind wobble
to watch it squirm
from where
I sit
whistling and whoosing
sounds resonating.
I want to capture
its essence
to feel the magic
against my face
warm at times
each season
competing for my
attention.
I want to chew into
the meat
like a mouthful
of peanuts
savouring
tasting
scent teasing from
the wind I call
upon.
(c) Richard L. Provencher
Website: www.wsprog.com/rp/
first published May 14-18, 2009
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Comments
Highhat | April 24, 2010 - 03:30
very nice and chewy ;-)
Cavalcaderl | April 24, 2010 - 08:45
new Richard L.Prov
Hi.
Love title
"The Wind is a Peanut"
Exciting.
Great poem way you have
brought title in super,
and if had good teeth!
love to chew meat,and all.
Hope your well.
Keep up writing,your
superb work.
julie xx
MistakenMagic | April 24, 2010 - 22:26
'I want to capture
its essence
to feel the magic
against my face
warm at times
each season
competing for my
attention.'
- really love these lines, Richard! Well done on the cherry ;)
Magic xxx
iDrew | April 25, 2010 - 13:33
I want to make the wind wobble.
I really do.
xDrew
Richard L. Prov... | April 27, 2010 - 01:33
Thank you everyone for your very kind comments. And yes, the cherry is very nice. Richard LP
Nathan Bednarek | May 8, 2010 - 17:40
Wow, I've been missing some great work whilst I was away from visiting this website ;-)
Another beautiful poem, Richard, you obviously have a deep connection to nature ;-)
A well deserved cherry.
Nathan.
Richard L. Prov... | August 16, 2011 - 00:09
Hi Nathan, better late than never for thanking you for your nice comments. For some reason I am not being notified by ABC when any comments are made on my work. So I have to peruse them from time to time. Cheers, from Richard LP
Highhat | August 16, 2011 - 04:30
Do you use your track button Richard on your profile page? That's the easiest way to keep up with the comments.
atb
;)Pia