Windy as a Morning Scent


from the ABC set POETRY - A Passage of Motion 2

From daring morning swim
I see the ocean in a tumult of waves

sharing artifacts from lumbering
crests wandering in contours

to crashing swells then silently away.

Leftovers include a carpet of kelp
like handfuls of moss hurled from the bay

with a side dish of quahogs, crab legs
and stones in captured colour.

In the distance a tidal retreat reveals
itself as blossoming sand dunes.

By the bay
twilight captures silver streaks
in its evening mask

dusk of colour downsized to
clouds of gray.

Inside one fishing village a report
card showers praise, husband’s codfish
catch something else.

Beyond the silence she listens to her
man snore after a meal of good loving

nearby, a son wraps himself in childhood.
Counts her blessings she does: a family.

© Richard L. Provencher

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | July 21, 2011 - 19:21

Wow! Richard,

you have excelled yourself with this amazing poem.

I really love your descriptions.

Jenny.

Richard L. Prov... | July 22, 2011 - 03:02

You are very kind, Jenny. And I thank you for your encouraging comments. Imagine, when I first wrote my outdoor/nature poems, publishers told me repeatedly no one likes nature poems, nor would they be published in any journal. Well at least 150 of my 200 published poems in newspapers, print journals, internet magazines, and anthologies are primarily nature poems, plus in about 20 university magazines. So don't always believe publishing editors. All the best, Richard LP.

Highhat | July 22, 2011 - 04:55

I like poems with descriptions of nature as I like this one.

;)Pia