Aethelstan, King of England, sat down outside the abbey’s refectory, laying his sword belt on the grass beside him. He watched the old woman’s slow approach and was amused by the disapproving looks on the monks’ faces.
‘You’re the prophetess, aren’t you,’ he said as she drew near to him.
‘Some say so,’ she replied. ‘Why did you summon me?’
He looked closely at her, narrowing his eyes against the low winter sunlight but glad of its brief warmth on his aching limbs.
‘I’ve spent my whole life welding this land together, just like my father and grandfather before me. I’ve no children, so what happens next? Was it worth anything – all that fighting?’
**
The prophetess waved her hand a fraction and, in an instant, the monks had disappeared and the abbey was in ruins amongst long meadow grass. A man with a camera was taking a picture; his wife was spreading out a picnic rug and two children were playing in the nearby stream.
**
Then they were back in the present again. The woman crouched down and placed a pinch of soil in the dying man’s palm.
‘Rest in peace, O King,’ she whispered. ‘The land endures.’

Comments
mmseason | January 13, 2010 - 18:20
Deep – chilling, almost. ;0)
~ mand
The Travel Hopefully Blog
rjnewlyn | January 14, 2010 - 23:23
Thanks mand - that's very kind of you. Glad to hear that someone's read it. This actually is the one I'm most fond of so far (more than others which have got more comment/cherries).
Silver Spun Sand | January 29, 2010 - 23:26
You certainly do have a way with words. Which is why I read this and am richer for doing so.
Even them cherries, them have them stones;-)
Tina
rjnewlyn | January 29, 2010 - 23:45
Thanks Tina. Yes, it hardly matters in the scheme of things - stones are good.
RachelPatricia | March 31, 2010 - 23:25
Another brilliant read from your collection - I can see why you are fond of it :)
Rachel xx
rjnewlyn | April 1, 2010 - 22:44
Thanks so much Rachel. This one feels like a slightly quiet and overgrown corner now. But I'm glad you've found it and like it.
Geoffrey | July 4, 2011 - 08:21
Thank God I've found your work; on now to get some very good reads from the rest!
rjnewlyn | July 4, 2011 - 20:10
Many thanks! I hope you enjoy some of them. This one was my favourite for quite a while.
Rob