‘This one will wake the dead,’ the shopkeeper whispered. The guitar sat on its stand, alone in the red carpeted inner sanctum. Six strings shone out against a jet-black body and I’m sure its chord was in my head already – the one that I knew had to be played.
It cost a small fortune but I couldn’t have done anything else. I carried it carefully up the hill under the stars. My left hand was in position, the fingers resting lightly behind the frets. Taking the plectrum, I said a short prayer, and brought it gently down across the strings.
At first I thought nothing would happen. But then the notes took on their own life and I could feel them resonating, as the ground opened before me to reveal the gaping chasm of Sheol below.
As the shades crawled out, I searched each weary face. Half the night seemed to have passed before I saw you. I know it was selfish to have disturbed your rest but I just had to say goodbye properly and how much I miss you. I think you understood.
The second chord closed the portal and I was left with the early morning birdsong.

Comments
insertponceyfre... | January 19, 2010 - 05:29
I've just read most of your stories - not sure why I didn't before. 200 words is nothing! - I'm so impressed with what you made from them
rjnewlyn | January 19, 2010 - 12:59
Thanks very much indeed 'insert...' It's really good to have the encouragement. Currently seeing what can be mined from this format - it seems an interesting thing to try out. But hard work...
Rob
Silver Spun Sand | January 21, 2010 - 00:13
A captivating piece of flash, which I would personally term (for what it is worth) a well-crafted piece of poetic prose.
And yes, I can personally identify with the bit about the hard work. Less is more, so they say, but it's a real challenge; and in this case, well risen to.
Tina
rjnewlyn | January 24, 2010 - 02:00
Thanks Tina - that's very kind. Yes, I've never liked the 'flash' term. Makes it sound too easy.