Why did I ever come this way? I should have heeded the warning signs. If the site wasn't so far from civilisation, I suppose they’d have set up road blocks.
“The last one of its kind,” the guidebook said. “A living legend.” Amongst the blackened remains of the visitor centre, it was immortalised in computer games and plastic toys. I miss that reassurance of a safer world.
I hadn’t realised quite how disorientating a forest could be and I should have turned back when the path petered out. But there was a clearing ahead and I was sure I saw something sliding off into the gloom. It was born in these woods and they say it can weave between the trees leaving hardly a trace behind. By the time I gave up the pursuit, I’d completely lost my bearings.
It’s almost too dark to write. I’m sure I can hear it not far away, its scales hissing over the leaves. A little earlier I glimpsed huge wings against the stars. Perhaps there’s more than one. The book says they hunt at dawn, so
(The note ends here. When they returned it to his widow, they cut off the charred edges)

Comments
Beeme | April 14, 2010 - 21:09
wow I really enjoyed this. I didn't except that ending. Was it a dragon? ;)
Beeme xx
insertponceyfre... | April 14, 2010 - 21:23
I think so too Beeme - wings. fire - what else could it be?
rjnewlyn | April 14, 2010 - 21:32
Yes. I'd thought about being more specific but somehow the word seemed to detract. And it's all become so Hollywood now - seems to be the death-knell for a lot of words that used to mean more. That's my rant anyway...
MistakenMagic | April 15, 2010 - 10:03
Wow, very chilling tale, Rob! I love the detail of the charred edges and how the reader has to piece all the information together - you were right to leave the word 'dragon' out, making the reader figure it out is wonderfully effective ;) Well done!
Magic xxx
rjnewlyn | April 16, 2010 - 17:16
Thanks very much Magic. I'm glad it worked!
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kenny_mooney | May 20, 2010 - 20:39
very interesting opening, i like the fragment nature of this, unfinished, unexplained, so much for the reader to fill in. Very nice.
rjnewlyn | May 20, 2010 - 22:12
Thanks very much Ewan. I'm honoured!
rjnewlyn | May 20, 2010 - 22:13
Thanks Kenny - that's very kind of you. Rob