My Secret Weapon

Without a doubt, when you return for more
I'll have the shirt off your back
and your belt on the floor

Meanwhile I could showcase to another boy
that hot pink body-con bliss
although my thrill is only for you to enjoy

As for my choice of song, I hope you can bare
I'll parade imprudently around the bed
so you'll be too distracted to care

Two hearts, become one
Two bodies, connect, become one
Same feelings, same intentions
I must disguise my blemishes, my pretensions.

Now I can hear you coming, you're nearly here
I can feel your vibes from my room at the front door
I'm about to see your glowing face, elight with pride
You've come to see your girl; your belt already on the floor.

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Comments

tcook | February 22, 2010 - 15:42

I like this - but I think you could lose the last line.

Your crit is on its way - I've just been a bit busy lately!

sabzwin | February 22, 2010 - 20:54

ah thankyou tcook, no problem, and I shall lose the last line too. thanks

InspiredWriter | February 27, 2010 - 13:01

Thats amazing, i love it so much.

sabzwin | June 27, 2010 - 15:56

Thanks for the cherrypick =D