jammie dodgers

A day fueled by Jammie Dodgers and J2O
wearing green espadrilles and a black quilted coat
hair waxed high
looks like plastic
against a gray cloudy sky

you

wearing pink shoes
and a too short skirt

I like you

a day fueled by Jammie Dodgers and J2O,
wearing nothing
hair awry
against a gray cloudy sky

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Comments

maggyvaneijk | July 22, 2011 - 19:56

A delicious slice of life, I like the effect of the "you" in the second stanza. Shame I hate jammie dodgers but still sounds like a good day :)

samhennig | October 26, 2011 - 17:58

cheers maggy