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Posted by samhennig on October 30, 2010 - 11:31

Is this the time?
Do you remember?

Is this the time
That we went there
Then we left
And never went back?

Is this the time?
Do you remember?

Is this the time
That we smiled
And didn’t stop
And then left
And never went back?

Is this the time?
Do you remember?

Is this that time?

That time,
When love was only ours,
I was only yours,
And you were only mine,
Is this that time?

That time
You can’t remember.

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Comments

pinda | October 30, 2010 - 11:44

Lovely poem, and it flows beautifully :)
I've read a number of your poems, they're great.

PS- Four lines from the botton, it's meant to be 'were' instead of 'where'?

samhennig | October 30, 2010 - 11:59

thank you very much and i am very glad you are enjoying my poems :)

insertponceyfre... | October 30, 2010 - 17:28

I really love this one sam - the ending is briliant

samhennig | October 31, 2010 - 00:42

Thank you insert..always nice to hear from you :) glad you enjoyed this!