(dedicated to my fiancee Courtney Silverman)
I met an Indian yesterday:
he was about my age
with wild eyes devoid of rage
I met an Indian yesterday:
his hair was long, black
and as shiny as the beak of a raven,
he wore worn, neatly beaded moccasins
I met an Indian yesterday;
he sat on a great backpack
with water bottles and blankets,
all protected by a tiny dreamcatcher
I met an Indian yesterday
sitting outside a Burger King;
I let him use my cell phone
to call his girlfriend for a ride
I met an Indian yesterday:
not a modoc or a klamath or any local tribe,
but a plains breed like sioux or commanche
I met an Indian yesterday,
just off the highway
by the college where Professor Luppi
and I once debated Custer's last stand;
he was entirely right
I met an Indian yesterday;
he offered me a few Sacagawea dollars;
I insisted on trading them for Washingtons
his girlfriend came in a Ford explorer,
Courtney and she talked about the weather
I met an Indian yesterday;
we smoked from a buffalo bone peace pipe
and followed them out of the city
toward a free American sun...
but only in my imagination

Comments
Ewan | June 20, 2009 - 07:13
Not sure about 'wild eyes devoid of rage' for two reasons; no point in starting with rhyme and immediately abandoning it. Secondly, I feel ambiguous about the phrase, can't decide if it's really good or not quite right. I think it's the rhyme that's prejudicing me and that there's actually nothing wrong with it at all!
I found this poem very interesting and an insight into something unfamiliar.
Regards
Ewan
Silver Spun Sand | June 20, 2009 - 08:10
An interesting poem, most certainly.
For me, it held a kind of magnetism - once I had started to read it, I felt compelled to read on.
And I am glad I did.
Tina:-)