(the following haiku were written during and/or about my six week stay at "The Treatment Center of Palm Beaches" in Florida.)
my arrival was
rude awakening; salesmen
were quite dishonest
omelette breakfast
sliced fruit plate but no coffee;
conversation calms
the yard surrounded
by diverse palms green and brown;
huddled groups smoking
walking the track. "don't
ask, don't tell" is ended. Black
gecko high on palm
lying in the sun;
the sound of horse-shoes and voices:
soft, old, low, young, loud
needle marks, stories
stark. dark clouds on a blue sky.
not a place for play
five weeks in: the pain
has not improved. All my thoughts
aimed at survival
arrived back home in
Modernia: books,
medicine, net, friends

Comments
Highhat | January 10, 2011 - 11:43
Great to have you back Seannelson. Nice Haiku ;)
skinner_jennifer | January 12, 2011 - 10:29
Hi seannelson,
I do hope you have managed to heal, it's so hard,
but I am sure you will be strong.
You take care.
Jenny.
seannelson | January 18, 2011 - 23:40
Thank you kindly Highhat and Jennifer. <]:- ) I'm just reading, taking my time, waiting until I have something really worthwhile to say.
Highhat | January 19, 2011 - 21:47
Glad to know you are at ease. I am anticipating more of your work
;)Pia