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from the ABC set What was I thinking! they sounded so good in my head.

Take my hand, for I am chaste,
Trace every contour of my face,
Tilt my head and let me taste,
Grace my throat with a pearl necklace.

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Comments

kheldar | March 8, 2010 - 14:24

Swap necklace for embrace and it will be even more fun lol Seriously though, I wouldn't have the confidence to write 4 lines and let them stand on their own, your own confidence is not misplaced.

David xx

shoe | March 8, 2010 - 15:32

Hmmm...I chose necklace for it's um connotations, would embrace imply the same thing? I am not well versed in these things, being a naive, innocent country girl! I appeal to your worldly maturity to clarify. confidence? nah, tis just for fun,:~D

MistakenMagic | March 8, 2010 - 16:03

I'll just say leave it as 'necklace' ;) Another wickedly saucy little poem, Shirley!

Magic xxx

shoe | March 8, 2010 - 16:15

Thanks Girlfriend!!

kheldar | March 8, 2010 - 16:17

Twas me who was being a country bumpkin, Your sauciness quite took me by suprise :--)

shoe | March 8, 2010 - 17:43

in a nice way I hope!:~D

WillSimpson | April 28, 2010 - 15:52

Haha this is filth, I love it.

shoe | April 29, 2010 - 09:27

;~}